1st event shoot review

Link: 
http://taylorscommercialphotographyblog.blogspot.com/2015/02/event-shoot-1-4th-six-weeks.html

Which photo do you like best? Why? 
The photo l like best is the first image.  I love the emotion and the fact that it tells a story. It also captured the action perfectly. I do think it might be a little grainy but it's a really good picture.

Which is your least favorite image? Why?
The third picture is my least favorite. It is very soft and blurry and the action isn't fully stopped. Also you cut their hands and feet off at a really weird length and they look awkward. You should've zoomed out a little. 

Overall, make two positive statements about their pictures.

I think that your photos are awesome. The colors that show up in your pictures are very lively and beautiful, and that is very hard to achieve in the gym. Also, you're great at capturing emotion and that is very important.

Overall, what is one area that this person could improve upon in your opinion.

I think that you could work on stopping the action better. The pictures are a little soft and not as sharp as they can be.